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Dark Rain
11-27-2001, 04:38 AM
a heart of gold,
with lips so soft,
a presence and allure,
that no one can touch,

she touches my heart,
and gently carresses my soul,
my feelings so impassioned,
never wanting to let go,

she sets me adrift,
and my heart starts to fly,
she is my angel,
my sweet...
sweet butterfly


Wow i never felt such emotion while writing a poem before. Any thoughts or opinions would be appreciated.

Angeleyes
11-27-2001, 03:29 PM
Very romantic and sensual!:D

Thanks for sharing it with us and hope you’ll be posting more soon.:)

Angeleyes:angel:

Chance
11-28-2001, 01:52 AM
Really liked this. Will share it with others. Look forward to reading more...