Does She?

[CrUsHeD dReAmS]

Does She?

I see you with her, and I wonder
does she know how lucky she truly is?
To have you love her and hold her,
to tell her that everything will be alright
on a bad day.

You are caring,loving, and always
willing to listen to others fears and problems.
But does she see these things?
If so does she appreciate these qualities?

Does she love you for who you are,
or does she expect you to change just for her?

Does she realize how good she's got it?
Or is she gonna look for someone better,
and cheat on you like the last girl?

If she is looking I would sure like to see her
find anyone better then you.

Cuz in my eyes you are as good as they come.
I love you for who you are, I don't want you to change,
and I know that there isn't anyone better.

So if things don't work out with her I just
want you to know that I'm here.


I wrote this for my crush but I haven't got up the nerve to actually give it to him. Cuz we are barely friends and I don't know how he would react. Well hope you liked it. Comments would be greatly appreciated.:)

[katty]

You have an unselfish love for your crush. Very well written, sincere and touching. Give it to him. Don't hide your feelings. You don't want to regret it when you think back.

Don't hide from him just because you love him. Just get to know him and when he needs someone like you, you will be there for him!

[Aprilsky]

I think your poem is a great way to express how you feel about him, it may steel him away, go for it!