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Sigh
02-11-2002, 02:15 AM
The Hyacinth by the grove
has woke
and cast it's pure
anti-shadow flame

broad footsteps fall
beating a slow rhthymn
like half-asleep drums

and the cloud canopy
opens gently, a slit
through which waves of light flood
and stir the scent of rain-soaked grass
into the air

The gate open swings
and through a person treads
a centuries trodden path
mindfull, and so, in a way
her ego not there
she is picked
by a flower.

BlackDragonSoul
02-11-2002, 03:48 AM
Dear Sigh,

Hello again brother. That was excellent. No bs. I especially like the part where you wrote about the, "cloud canopy." Nicely worded my friend. I apologize for my recent absence. I see that you're still writing brilliantly. Please do continue. You definitely have a deep, and rather interesting perspective to show the world. Later.

Que(BDS:devil: )

Sigh
02-11-2002, 11:21 AM
Que,
I must confess its my first post in a long while as well:)
Thanks for the compliment. I thought the Cloud Canopy bit had a certain sensuality:devil:
Glad you like it.