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Deacon Dex
01-15-2002, 03:11 PM
in my dream i awake
i try to climb the wall
back to reality
but when i reach out
that wall fades away
and i fall
i fall back into my dream
and you are there
my dream reveals my desires
somewhere i am not
someone i am not with
my dream reveals my desires
what i long to be when awake
i stumble back to my dream
and even it fades away
and sleep fails me
so i dream laying awake
and you are not there
and i dream

:sleeping:

Romeo
01-17-2002, 05:41 AM
Well written. Your poem flows smoothly.

katty
01-17-2002, 11:05 PM
I like your poem!