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emerald00
01-14-2002, 11:45 PM
I put my heart on the line,
each and every time,
I look into your big green eyes and get lost.

My heart pounds in my ears,
what am I doing?
I thought I learned all those years,
of heartache.

The greater the risk,
the greater the reward.
So, they say.
I risked my most prized possession,
my heart.
You took it and ran.
Why did I even let myself start,
to fall in love with you?

You left me when I needed you most.
All that I have to hold on to,
is your ghost.

I miss you,
I care,
I wish you would come back to me

Romeo
01-17-2002, 05:52 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.

especially this portion

"The greater the risk,
the greater the reward.
So, they say.
I risked my most prized possession,
my heart."

emerald00
01-17-2002, 11:04 AM
thank you , i appreciate your feedback

katty
01-17-2002, 10:48 PM
nice. Sound like a song, I tried to sing it but my windows nearly crack.

emerald00
01-17-2002, 10:50 PM
thanks kate, and i am sure you sing wonderfully