All A Dream

[Angeleyes]

His fingers gently caress my skin,
And I get a tingling sensation within.
As he holds me close and whispers my name,
Will I ever feel the same?
He places a gentle kiss upon my cheek,
Then progresses downwards to seek; the nape of my neck.
A shiver runs down my spine,
Oh this feeling is so divine.
My heart is set on fire,
With the burning desire.
For him to possess the very depths of my soul,
And make my life whole.
But alas I wake from my dream,
Reality is cruel and mean.
My imagination has been playing tricks on me,
Will my true love rescue me from my misery?

[psychoDiablo2]

thats a nice poem. i too, wonder when im going to be rescued..

[Regnak]

A lovely tale of the rejoice of love, yet who knows for even a cruel life offers a dream, and everything starts with a dream for in the end all there is are dreams and all that appears is an image , a reflection of sorrow in a world that has forsaken dreams.
Anyways ... enough of my rambling heh, thanks for sharing it. :D

[sugarbear]

That poem was the bomb.I can relate to it,Real good,makes me want to have that dream all night if it like that,Thanks for sharing it.:)

[Angeleyes]

Thanks for responding.

psychoDiablo2: - Welcome to ACME!

Regnak: - Hiya welcome back, been a while. Thanks for the "rambling". As poignant as ever!:tup:

Sugarbear: *makes me want to have that dream all night if it like that*. Yeah, I know what you mean;).

Take care all.

AE

[jidk]

I liked your poem so much, I decided to alter it to reflect feeling that I actually have toward another special someone. I hope you don't mind. Am sure there are some out there that have simuliar feelings. Let me know what you think. Hope I am not out of line here.

FEELINGS SET A FIRE

Her fingers gently caress my skin,
I a tingling sensation within.
she holds me close, she whispers my name,
I'll never be the same?
a kiss upon my face,
progresses to the neck.
Shivers through my spine,
Oh! a feeling so divine.
My heart is set a fire,
for her a burning desire.
This feeling possess the depths of my soul,
this feeling to make life whole.

I wake with this dream,
though reality be cruel
My imagination plays not such tricks.
Waiting for my love
to rescue my soul,
who set this heart a fire?

:devil: :devil:

[Angeleyes]

*I liked your poem so much, I decided to alter it to reflect feeling that I actually have toward another special someone. I hope you don't mind. Am sure there are some out there that have simuliar feelings. Let me know what you think. Hope I am not out of line here. *


Well Jake I’m very flattered you liked my poem so much so you altered it to reflect your own feelings.

As far as stepping over the line……..hmmmmmmmmm ………well I'm thinking........

Ok......here's the deal………if you ever publish your version ………the royalties need to be split 95% to me and 5% to you. Is that a deal? :lol:.

[jidk]

Well Angeleyes;

You going to have to take credit for all of it. I only enjoy the fun I get out it.

I am glade you aren't offended. It is a very nice poem. I only tailored it a little. ;) ;) :)